My newest adventure is underway. It has lead me to take up residency in a new blog,
Like the Feathers of an Arrow (affectionately known as LFA).

...don't open...don't throw away... is not disappearing completely (not yet),
but postings here will be limited.

Tuesday, April 5, 2011

1 Barney's Defense

appalled by his words
shocked by his audacity
she slapped him across the face

humor kept him safe
though his bros often dismissed
his need to safeguard his heart



i had thought with Poetic Asides' duel challenge i might write a "half & half" poem, half serious-half goofy...even thought i picked a decent topic.  in the end though, it turned more serious than expected.  regardless of how it turned out, i think my choice of form worked well...since i intended to look at this from two perspecitves (originally one goofy and one serious), a sedoka seemed like it would be the best attack.

1 comment:

  1. How I met your mother - am I right? Love that show!

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