My newest adventure is underway. It has lead me to take up residency in a new blog,
Like the Feathers of an Arrow (affectionately known as LFA).

...don't open...don't throw away... is not disappearing completely (not yet),
but postings here will be limited.
Showing posts with label ~loop poetry. Show all posts
Showing posts with label ~loop poetry. Show all posts

Sunday, January 23, 2011

11 Our Hearts' Refrain (Revisited)

we were forbidden to speak
forbidden to meet one another's gaze
but what stolen glances could not sustain
our bodies spoke our hearts' refrain

we are ruled by archaic laws
laws created to keep bloodlines pure
pure of the taint our union would bring

we were forbidden to touch
forbidden to dance in one another's arms
but what stolen glances could not sustain
our bodies spoke our hearts' refrain

we are ruled by our hearts
hearts that refused to bend
bend to the elitests' views of lineage
lineage we would dilute with our coupling

we were forbidden to meet
forbidden to be alone with one another
but what stolen glances could not sustain
our bodies spoke our hearts' refrain

we are ruled by our love
love that grew from our hearts' desires
desires that knew nothing of ancient laws

we were forbidden to love
forbidden to share our lives with one another
but what stolen glances could not sustain
our bodies spoke our hearts' refrain

we are ruled by truth
truth that our destiny is ours' alone
alone for us to choose and follow
follow to the ends of the earth together



i let it stew for a bit (see original Our Hearts' Refrain)...in the end i embedded four additional stanzas using a variation on loop poetry...the four new stanzas could too probably stand on their own...i can't decide if i should let them stand together or separate them into their own entities.  for now i'll let them blend...

while inspired by Jingle Poetry's Poetry Potluck [Language, Signs, and Signals], it did not ripen in time for this past Monday's post...strangely enough, i think it might still fit with this upcoming Poetry Potluck [Rules, Regulations, and Laws], we'll have to see if it ferments in time...

Saturday, November 20, 2010

0 Letting Go

I desperately want to hide
hide away somewhere secure and safe
safe from the torture of being unable to do something
something they should be doing but lack action

I don't want to me near the craziness
craziness that is perpetuated over and over
over time you'd think it would balance
balance so the craziness didn't cause such detriment

I know I'm taking the cowards way out
out of the bureaucracy that ties my hands
hands that long to get dirty and yet are useless
useless and unable to make a big wave

So I rather hide away from it all and ignore
ignore what I cannot change and yet needs to
to bury myself back in the trenches
trenches where I can make small waves of change



thought i'd try something new...loop poetry.  it worked well enough for expressing my current state of frustration and hopelessness.