My newest adventure is underway. It has lead me to take up residency in a new blog,
Like the Feathers of an Arrow (affectionately known as LFA).

...don't open...don't throw away... is not disappearing completely (not yet),
but postings here will be limited.

Monday, April 11, 2011

3 Too Young

just the name
brings threatening tears
to a crest
painful waves
carrying what could have been
crash against my heart


i've had a very turbulent day. one particular thought lingers in me...so i thought i'd use One Stop Poetry's Form Monday to expel it from my system...i suppose expel is a little optimistic.  so here is my first shadorma.
Posted by RMP at 3:43 PM
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3 comments:

  1. moondustwriterApril 11, 2011 at 5:05 PM

    I'm glad you took a shot at Shadorma and turbulent.

    I like poetry to express - personally it prevents a bottle neck

    Happy Monday

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  2. Helena WhiteApril 11, 2011 at 7:34 PM

    I know that heartache....Writing can be a catalyst for healing... ♥ ஆ

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  3. AnonymousApril 12, 2011 at 4:37 AM

    i am sorry for your turbulent day. *hugs* it is a great example of a shadorma ~ i hope to attempt one soon. at least writing may help to avoid a complete melt down.

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