#1
The future depends on us.
Will we be worthy
role models?
#2
They're eyes see all that we do.
Can we be better?
Should we care?
#3
They idolize who you are.
Should you be careful
how you act?
#4
They look up to you with awe.
Do you deserve it?
Are you true?
these four quinzaines were written in response to Jingle Poetry's Poetry Potluck [Idols, Role Models, and Mentors]. was a tad trickier fitting this theme with this form, but technically i find anything with syllable restrictions to be a bit of a challenge.
Questions we should all ask ourselves. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteNice take, turning the prompt inside out. Like it!
ReplyDeletelovely wonders..
ReplyDeleteenjoyed the imagery.
A++
deserving questions.. thank you for this! my potluck- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/03/08/nectar-from-heaven/
ReplyDeletegreat questions and a great form. i really like it!
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