LOUD
shocking
obnoxious
his persuasive tone
plus the riches he boasts
repell all those around him
"blaring volumes clash with senses"
it's that time again...in keeping with tradition (the past two months...during the last week...for 3WW...i think that makes a tradition...), i have constructed a clarity pyramid from prompt presented by Three Word Wednesday [3WW=>loud, persuasive, riches]. it took a bit of finagling, but i think it works well enough.
I think it works extremely well.
ReplyDeleteIt works very well.Don't we all know people like this or have heard of people like this?Well written
ReplyDeleteYes, reading this brings certain individuals to mind. Thanks for the info about the clarity pyramid - I will give it a go sometime. Finagling!! - I didn't know this word before. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteThe poem itself looked like a loud hailer (as well as a pyramid)...loud is definitely unattractive..Jae
ReplyDeleteFinagling, one of my most favorite words! I'm most intrigued by your clarity pyramid and will have to try it out. You've done a most excellent piece with it!
ReplyDeletepretty clear to me. Well said (and constructed).
ReplyDeleteWorks well for me. I like the verbal construction, but heartily dislike the kind of character it describes.
ReplyDeleteI know that guy! Great job. Vb
ReplyDeleteFunny, though, that these types rarely notice how repulsive they are. Nice job--you always handle form poetry with skill.
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