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Like the Feathers of an Arrow (affectionately known as LFA).

...don't open...don't throw away... is not disappearing completely (not yet),
but postings here will be limited.

Wednesday, March 30, 2011

9 LOUD

LOUD
shocking
obnoxious

his persuasive tone
plus the riches he boasts
repell all those around him

"blaring volumes clash with senses"



it's that time again...in keeping with tradition (the past two months...during the last week...for 3WW...i think that makes a tradition...), i have constructed a clarity pyramid from prompt presented by Three Word Wednesday [3WW=>loud, persuasive, riches].  it took a bit of finagling, but i think it works well enough.

9 comments:

  1. I think it works extremely well.

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  2. It works very well.Don't we all know people like this or have heard of people like this?Well written

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  3. Yes, reading this brings certain individuals to mind. Thanks for the info about the clarity pyramid - I will give it a go sometime. Finagling!! - I didn't know this word before. Thank you!

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  4. The poem itself looked like a loud hailer (as well as a pyramid)...loud is definitely unattractive..Jae

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  5. Finagling, one of my most favorite words! I'm most intrigued by your clarity pyramid and will have to try it out. You've done a most excellent piece with it!

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  6. pretty clear to me. Well said (and constructed).

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  7. Works well for me. I like the verbal construction, but heartily dislike the kind of character it describes.

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  8. Funny, though, that these types rarely notice how repulsive they are. Nice job--you always handle form poetry with skill.

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