Date: between 11/15/93 and 06/14/94
Setting: Senior year of high school
Form: Free verse w/ rhyme
This year I wish for one simple thing
I’d like a baby brother
For that’s what I hope you’ll bring.
Someone for me to play with
And sing sweet lullabies
To rock to sleep in his little cradle
Where my head once use to lie.
I know I've been a good girl
I've said my ‘thanks’ and ‘please’
I always clean my plate off
I even eat all my peas.
And so I ask you nicely
Oh, Santa would you please
Bring me a little brother
To grow with, love and tease.
To rock to sleep in his little cradle
Where my head once use to lie.
I know I've been a good girl
I've said my ‘thanks’ and ‘please’
I always clean my plate off
I even eat all my peas.
And so I ask you nicely
Oh, Santa would you please
Bring me a little brother
To grow with, love and tease.
Notes: During my senior year, I had the opportunity to take a class that allowed you to leave school for the last two periods of the day and go to one of the school district's elementary schools to work with a teacher. I was paired with a first grade teacher. During this time, I did a lot of different things from working with students to making photo copies. I remember one afternoon listening to the teachers in the hallway after school about the student work hanging on the wall. One of the student wished for a sibling. From that this little number came to life.
Artifact I: The scribblings that led to the poem.
Artifact II: The final writing of the poem.
smiles...that is a pretty cool poem...and cool as well that you got to go work with the elementary school kids as well..a great lesson in giving back....kids are awesome too in how they think...i bet quite a few have wished for baby brothers....or sisters....
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