thinking this way takes too much time.
linking up lines; making designs; (hrr)
why really, it should be a crime!
ignore vowels with consonance;
employ vowels with assonance;
enjoy each kind? deploy entwined? (hrr)
ignore my growing dissonance?
so many different kinds seems wrong.
perfect, slant, rich... the list is long
connect the ends? effect the heads? (hrr)
so many ways to build rhymes strong.
i was so content to stop at the first stanza...but figured the more i toyed the more solid my use might seem. i really should learn to stick with my first instincts. this insane attempt at playing with different types of rhymes and position and what not was inspired by One Stop Poetry's Form Monday. i now know way more about rhymes than i'm sure i care to... i wonder how many different types i managed to employ.... the (hrr) is my pathetic attempt at expressing an exasperation...it throws off my syllable count a bit, but i couldn't help but add it in.
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