Writing Unmasked (by rmp, that's me) |
not the real me
how could they
i keep her hidden
so well hidden i
sometimes can't see her
some may try to uncover
try to see what lies within
but i conceal her behind a mask
one that looks delicate and fragile
but is forged in iron, steel, and diamond
so well have i worn it
sometimes i forget she lay beneath
but she's there
lying in wait
knowing she'll be freed
for short stints at a time
to speak a truth only she knows
in the only way she knows how
so well she does write
sometimes the world gets a glimpse of me
written for Thursday Poets Rally...yes, i realize it is not thursday...but i've never been very good at deadlines...
well done...
ReplyDeleteThursday Poets Rally runs an entire week, thus you are cool.
welcome sharing and have fun!
And who are you my precious one ?
ReplyDeletetheres a certain mystery as to who you are here.. here's my wk 38.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/09/30/i-cant-hold-it/
ReplyDeleteAh, we do expose ourselves in our poetry do we not
ReplyDeleteLoved this
David
superb poem :)
ReplyDeletelike the nuances so much. we all hide behind masks but yet yearn to reveal a bit here and a bit there.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. I also come out best on paper. In person I often lose myself behind many masks and only peek out occasionally.
ReplyDeleteAs long as you continue to write, you will always be visible...nice write.
ReplyDeleteNice poem for the Rally! I love the mask picture too!
ReplyDeletedealines, schmeadlines lol
ReplyDeletethis is powerful, alomst frightening, especially since I can relate so well!
Nice, sometimes its best to keep the true you hidden, reveal for only those worthy! Nice work!!!
ReplyDeleteHappy Sunday!
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Thanks for the time!
Good Luck!
nice that you have writing to reveal yourself,... if only in stints.
ReplyDeletelove the twists of words.
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