My newest adventure is underway. It has lead me to take up residency in a new blog,
Like the Feathers of an Arrow (affectionately known as LFA).

...don't open...don't throw away... is not disappearing completely (not yet),
but postings here will be limited.

Saturday, August 21, 2010

0 A Simple Touch

i watch as you sleep
the fear burns deep within me
will you vanish at my touch

though my eyes are closed
i can feel you watching me
my body aches for your touch

My latest exploration of poetic form...a sedoka...not so sure it works, but it was a lot easier than trying to create a palindrome.  Besides, the word looked a bit like sudoku, so I couldn't help myself.

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