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but postings here will be limited.

Wednesday, October 24, 2012

8 Can I Have This Dance?: Uneven

TitleBreakeven (Falling to Pieces)
Artist:  The Script
Album:  The Script
Genre:  Pop
Uneven

Heartstrings dangle, grazing the ground;
his chest cut wide open--
each breath a labor (of lost love),
while she walks away clean
unhindered by 
strings neatly cut close to the heart.
Notes:  I'm a little early with this CIHTD?, but the words for this week's Three Word Wednesday [3WW=>dangle, labor, neatly] spun the thought of heartstrings, this song just leapt to the forefront.  So, I went with it.

8 comments:

  1. beautiful imagery of what happens when one person loves more then the other.

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  2. you've captured the sadness very well.

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  3. your words describe heartbreak so well!

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  4. the imagery is fantastically grazing..like wounds..uneven and sore..jae

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