My newest adventure is underway. It has lead me to take up residency in a new blog,
Like the Feathers of an Arrow (affectionately known as LFA).

...don't open...don't throw away... is not disappearing completely (not yet),
but postings here will be limited.

Wednesday, June 29, 2011

11 STUN

STUN
transfix
petrify

goose bumps, white knuckles,
and feet rooted in place
where all symptoms of his gaze

“paralyzing fears pierce the heart”



i'm still wondering around in my little hiding place, but making occassional trips to the surface now and then.  i couldn't pass up the last Wednesday of the month at Three Word Wednesday [3WW=>bump(s), knuckle(s), transfix]...not when there was a clarity pyramid poem to write. 

11 comments:

  1. I love the clarity pyramid... great use of the words!

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  2. Glad you came to the surface..a stunning little piece..Jae ;)

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  3. So brief. So powerful. So glad you shared.

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  4. very powerful and in so little words.Great use of the prompts.

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  5. Thank you for your kind comments on my blog. I'm so glad you visited and resurfaced--you have talent and insights to share with us all. Social anxiety comes visiting from time-to-time, I suspect to many of us who are involved in creative pastimes. Blessings.

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  6. Happy to see your work again, RMP! I know the feelings of which you speak. Very well said.

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  7. I've never seen a clarifying pyramid before. This is cool.

    - Alice

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