a sweet demure child
pushed prodded and offended
finally erupts
a volitale volcano
no longer a dorment soul
after toying with several other forms of Japanese poetry (haiku, senryu, and sedoka), i thought i might expand my exploration...thus this attempt at a tanka. inspiration for this creation came from Three Word Wednesday. [3WW=>demure, offend(ed), volatile]
and it works, on so many levels.
ReplyDeleteSo true! Great work!
ReplyDeleteYes, yes. That is just like a child. Does any child ever have a dormant soul? Well done.
ReplyDeleteI says it perfectly, wonderful, just wonderful!
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