i saw my reflection in your eyes
and i did not recognize me
so long i have search to find
the woman i see there
strong and beautiful
how easily
you seem to
have found
her
Showing posts with label ~nonet. Show all posts
Showing posts with label ~nonet. Show all posts
Friday, July 15, 2011
Monday, July 11, 2011
7 Hopeless
your words still run rampant in my head
ricocheting like hot bullets
striking each vital organ
burning holes deep within
bleeding me bone dry
rendering me
completely
without
hope
Upon reading One Stop Poetry's Form Monday introduction to the nonet, i decided to have a go at it. figuring it very similar to the etheree which i've already experimented with, i thought it wouldn't be too bad of a write. and while it wasn't, the counting down of the nonet as opposed to the counting up of the (traditional) etheree was a bit more of a challenge i think. in the end, i think it came out halfway decent.
ricocheting like hot bullets
striking each vital organ
burning holes deep within
bleeding me bone dry
rendering me
completely
without
hope
Upon reading One Stop Poetry's Form Monday introduction to the nonet, i decided to have a go at it. figuring it very similar to the etheree which i've already experimented with, i thought it wouldn't be too bad of a write. and while it wasn't, the counting down of the nonet as opposed to the counting up of the (traditional) etheree was a bit more of a challenge i think. in the end, i think it came out halfway decent.
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