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Wednesday, January 26, 2011

FIT

FIT
tantrum
conniption

he ranted and raved
when his janky car stalled;
abashed she scooched down to hide

"scene as explosive as fireworks"


decided to play with a clarity pyramid as i tried to figure out how i'd bring together the slang words put forth by Three Word Wednesday [3WW=conniption, janky, scooch].  i guess it work out okay.  i'm still toying with another idea i had for the three words...maybe later they'll come together...
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5 comments:

  1. Sheilagh LeeJanuary 26, 2011 at 3:51 PM

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  2. Sheilagh LeeJanuary 26, 2011 at 3:52 PM

    sorry for some reason letters were missing last post.Sheilagh Lee said:Truly awe inspring the way you put these slang words together.I love the last comment scene as explosive as fireworks.

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  3. Jae RoseJanuary 27, 2011 at 9:52 AM

    Yes - clever to use both these words and the poetry form..it was very visual and jarring..Jae

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  4. RenJanuary 27, 2011 at 1:41 PM

    Nice! Reminds me of hubby and I when he's driving (of course) lol

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  5. Thom GabrukiewiczFebruary 1, 2011 at 12:35 PM

    good stuff, handled the words really well. It works.

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