BETS
wagers
high stake risks
dabbling with bookies
a debt I need now pay
with money or utter pain
"gambling can lead to lean pockets"
wagers
high stake risks
dabbling with bookies
a debt I need now pay
with money or utter pain
"gambling can lead to lean pockets"
i decided to dabble a bit more with poetic form. this turned out to be a very lean clarity pyramid. after much back and forth with the initial triplet, i uttered a sigh of relief as i counted out the last eight syllables. this post was inspired by Three Word Wednesday [3WW=dabble, lean, utter].
Great job! I think you'll like my poems on gambling and vices.
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Loved it!
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Very creative!
ReplyDeleteso very true. That's why I don't bet - or play the lottery.
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