Saturday, August 21, 2010

A Simple Touch

i watch as you sleep
the fear burns deep within me
will you vanish at my touch

though my eyes are closed
i can feel you watching me
my body aches for your touch





My latest exploration of poetic form...a sedoka...not so sure it works, but it was a lot easier than trying to create a palindrome.  Besides, the word looked a bit like sudoku, so I couldn't help myself.

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