tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post469322496710993403..comments2024-03-02T11:41:20.786-05:00Comments on ... don't open ... don't throw away ...: Our Hearts' Refrain (Revisited)RMPhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-83315883123721749002011-01-26T20:28:33.870-05:002011-01-26T20:28:33.870-05:00A very special ambience you created in this poem w...A very special ambience you created in this poem with the help of playing with forms, ideas and vocabulary. Thanks for sharing, enjoyed it a lot. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-1642975837307124382011-01-26T13:30:24.603-05:002011-01-26T13:30:24.603-05:00This is so true...and so beautiful...
No matter w...This is so true...and so beautiful... <br />No matter what the rules/laws are, they cannot really curb the minds and hearts of an individual... they may curb the actions, but never the thoughts! <br /><br />I could relate to this poem in quite a few ways :)... awesome!Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-29123616303465302402011-01-24T17:56:34.089-05:002011-01-24T17:56:34.089-05:00i love the way you showed both sides of this... th...i love the way you showed both sides of this... this theme on rules is not my favorite, but i really love this one :)Robin Ellen Lucashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00554882063190430987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-11307181631122801432011-01-24T12:15:41.749-05:002011-01-24T12:15:41.749-05:00this to me is impressive! the repetitions hit the ...this to me is impressive! the repetitions hit the right notes that lends to the mood of your whole composition! here's my potluck for this week: http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/08/04/here-for-you/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-61073196761881927382011-01-24T11:45:17.509-05:002011-01-24T11:45:17.509-05:00forbidden love, a torment!!!!
Thought it could tur...forbidden love, a torment!!!!<br />Thought it could turn into a villanelle...nice write, cool! Happy potluck!<br /><br />http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-24890902747681363302011-01-24T10:32:47.262-05:002011-01-24T10:32:47.262-05:00What is it about "forbidden" that makes ...What is it about "forbidden" that makes us want it all the more?<br /><br />http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2011/01/24/boundaries-jingles-poetry-potluck/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-18229780253921876022011-01-24T09:32:02.549-05:002011-01-24T09:32:02.549-05:00Interesting poem and a smooth flow
its true "...Interesting poem and a smooth flow<br /><br />its true " alone for us to choose and follow "Uma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-38816557250451810672011-01-24T06:20:09.628-05:002011-01-24T06:20:09.628-05:00Very enjoyable. It kept making me think of 'Ro...Very enjoyable. It kept making me think of 'Romeo and Juliet'! <br />Revising poems is hard work, do changes make them better or worse!?<br /><br />http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/01/24/dark-teen/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-72918214626298849492011-01-24T03:55:45.560-05:002011-01-24T03:55:45.560-05:00we are ruled by our hearts
hearts that refused to ...we are ruled by our hearts<br />hearts that refused to bend <br />bend to the elitests' views of lineage<br />lineage we would dilute with our coupling<br /><br />this stanza i liked, especially the line, "we are ruled by our hearts"Chim's World of Literaturehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08052021144209095350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-34560800743912451682011-01-23T23:21:31.532-05:002011-01-23T23:21:31.532-05:00I like the we were, we are tension. niceI like the we were, we are tension. niceAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-37977532447033803372011-01-23T22:39:21.113-05:002011-01-23T22:39:21.113-05:00we were forbidden to love
forbidden to share our l...we were forbidden to love<br />forbidden to share our lives with one another<br />but what stolen glances could not sustain<br />our bodies spoke our hearts' refrain<br /><br /><br />well done, Thanks for linking.<br /><br />A++Jinglenoreply@blogger.com