tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post3606728189549050359..comments2024-03-02T11:41:20.786-05:00Comments on ... don't open ... don't throw away ...: ... don't open ... don't throw away ...RMPhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-35786581314560487142011-10-08T00:16:40.634-04:002011-10-08T00:16:40.634-04:00You express these emotions in a very deep way. A f...You express these emotions in a very deep way. A few months ago I lost a sweet cousin to cancer. She had spent perhaps 35 or 40 years severely agoraphobic. Reading this poem somehow made me think of her. Very vulnerable.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-51157995574595904852011-10-06T22:52:49.191-04:002011-10-06T22:52:49.191-04:00Interesting form, it's new to me and I enjoyed...Interesting form, it's new to me and I enjoyed it immensely... Wrapping refrain is something I will enjoy I think. Might I suggest "Don't throw it out, all that I am" as a solution to your last stanza? Great poem, especially considering you whipped it up with little inspiration at the last minute....!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-34241837623477902492011-10-06T18:11:17.422-04:002011-10-06T18:11:17.422-04:00Thank you for taking the risk. I'm glad I did....Thank you for taking the risk. I'm glad I did. Enjoyed.Joanne Young Elliotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14431836725661024756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-45480515695563277632011-10-06T08:42:16.484-04:002011-10-06T08:42:16.484-04:00You may have been lacking inspiration, but you'...You may have been lacking inspiration, but you'd never know it by the write. Thought it a great use of the form, and really enjoyed the reading. Glad you made it!Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-57949751557974284622011-10-05T23:59:17.586-04:002011-10-05T23:59:17.586-04:00i think your inspiration did well with this...nice...i think your inspiration did well with this...nice beat in the rhyme...it is a risk opening one self up knowing the other might throw you away...hope they embrace you...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com