tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post2871224676788175419..comments2024-03-02T11:41:20.786-05:00Comments on ... don't open ... don't throw away ...: Last Call: Embodying Her (Embracing Myself)RMPhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-5484073260494190992013-01-30T16:22:16.846-05:002013-01-30T16:22:16.846-05:00Only a math geek could come up with this! Wonderfu...Only a math geek could come up with this! Wonderful poem--and one doesn't need to know the intricate rhyme scheme to feel the rhythm of this. Well done!Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-39050665601692709002013-01-30T10:56:25.434-05:002013-01-30T10:56:25.434-05:00Gawd..the form scares the crap outa me, frankly. ...Gawd..the form scares the crap outa me, frankly. But the repitition works...and the poem is great...(form is too much like a math course I flunked) I'm in awe!1emeraldcitynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-24635615813537096162013-01-29T21:22:43.914-05:002013-01-29T21:22:43.914-05:00I love the poem, no matter the form. It came out b...I love the poem, no matter the form. It came out beautifully.Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2013/01/29/back-in-the-day-3/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-80251342103312625712013-01-29T19:04:37.019-05:002013-01-29T19:04:37.019-05:00I enjoyed this twice. Love when people read their...I enjoyed this twice. Love when people read their poetry. The tone and inflection of the voice add so much. Thanks. Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-86535962548834531632013-01-29T18:40:20.975-05:002013-01-29T18:40:20.975-05:00Yeah, well thought out, I quite like the repetitio...Yeah, well thought out, I quite like the repetition here, good work.<br /><br /> <a href="http://www.sewina.blogspot.co.uk/2013/01/like-modigliani.html" rel="nofollow">Mine’s HERE</a>Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-15002454118853937712013-01-29T18:23:09.643-05:002013-01-29T18:23:09.643-05:00The ending is sad...but that is, unfortunately, so...The ending is sad...but that is, unfortunately, sometimes what happens with dreams. Lots of emotion packed in your words.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-62480541240179652942013-01-29T17:10:09.056-05:002013-01-29T17:10:09.056-05:00packed with emotions and the repetition works real...packed with emotions and the repetition works really well..what an interesting form..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-33190753071828835402013-01-29T15:49:54.591-05:002013-01-29T15:49:54.591-05:00Fantastic writing! Form scares me, to be perfectly...Fantastic writing! Form scares me, to be perfectly honest...but I try when prompted. This is indeed intriguing...and the two additional lines indeed packed an added punch...as to the subject matter...once I find the me that ran away...I'll let you know how I did it...your words resonate...could be my pre-mid-life crisis! ;) Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3681047059820449960.post-91440744504032310562013-01-29T15:37:44.652-05:002013-01-29T15:37:44.652-05:00wow what an interesting form...have never heard of...wow what an interesting form...have never heard of it...what emotion as well...to see who you could be but have them dancing just out of reach...lots packed into that thought....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com